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Loneliness


As I walk out the door,
The sunshine falls on my face;
And I hide my feelings in my deepest shadows,
As I move my way.

I get loads of smiles,
And some winks from my friends.
As I smile back and greet them,
I feel the pain that is inside.


Now I wish I could run,
And never look back.
To go to a place,
Where my dreams come alive.

Its time for you to know,
That there is much more inside of me.
Than the normal girl you see,
Whom you've taken to be me.


Deep down inside,
I'm more innocent and sensitive.
But that's the real me,
And from now on, That's how I'll be.

I'm sick and tired of all these smiles,
Which I've faked this long.
The lonliness Inside of me,
Is starting to grow strong.

And One day, I'll leave, leave forever.
In the beginning it may pain,
But everone will learn to move on.
As I'm just a girl, Who was meant to be gone.!




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26 comments:

feelthroughme said...

I'm sick and tired of all these smiles,
Which I've faked this long.
The lonliness Inside of me,
Is starting to grow strong.


its very true with me also ............

Now I wish I could run,
And never look back.
To go to a place,
Where my dreams come alive.

Its time for you to know,
That there is much more inside of me.
Than the normal girl you see,
Whom you've taken to be me.


each line in this is damn meaningful... i am just loving this poem .. super like

feelthroughme said...

i am still in this peom hangover ... just cant come out of it .. feeling like to read and analyse again and again ..

Princess Poo said...

Hehehe :)
Thanks a lot :).
When I first wrote it and then read it I was like, "I dont think this is something which should be called as poem. This is like whole bunch of nothing".
After reading your comment I dont know what to say :)
Thanks a lot :). It meant a lot to me :D :).
And lol :). Hehe :D. I didnt know my poem had such an attractive stance ;)

feelthroughme said...

yeah .. you explained about loneliness quite very well ... and when we start to analyse each lines, it gives so meaning and you will start to enjoy it, feel it and will definitely read again n again.. i have already kept copy of it in document for myself :)just to read again n again ..

Princess Poo said...

Wow :O :)
Thanks :)

antara4ever said...

Beautiful beautiful! And I know how you feel...I do the 'perpetual veil' thing all the darn time.

But you are not the girl who was meant to be gone. You're here to stay.

Keep posting!!!

~Antara

Princess Poo said...

Thanks Antara.
Oh! A partner in loneliness :P.
Hehehe.
Awww. I Hope so.
Thank you :D :).

N.S.Kirti said...

we are all in the same boat then Pooja.. join the club...
hope is a bubble none can burst
one, i have hidden deep inside me
in a world far away from the makeshift falseness i live,
in a world i am MYSELF, something none can see...

lets never give up okay?? pian will come and go, life never does(okay i cant BELIEVE i am saying all this :P)
one day you, me and Antara and other sensitive
fools will find a better place to live in... till then... keep smiling :)

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Princess Poo said...

@Kirti
Wow nice words :)
hehe! Yeah I know.

I hope so :).
Thanks a lot :).

Vivek said...

totally dosent suit u.. :-/ get rid of these feelings . these feelings will come and go but frnds will be thr fr u forever. :D trust them and enjoy ur life. :)

Sujatha Sathya said...

you know i find poetry extremely difficult to pen but you've made it look so seamless here.
very nicely written poem

Thousif Raza said...

its painful but i like it... very simple, very you. I like it

Take care and keep writing.......

blackandwhiteheart said...

live in hope that life would give you a fair chance, fair chance to souls and hearts that deserve it.
Yet, the path of hope is painful more than seldom.

sometimes, the world does need to understand when we say "leave me alone".

a beautiful, melancholic poem. i hard to accept.that someone doesn't see what we are on the insides.

people like, they love guys who are bad on the insides.. and people like, they don't even FEEL THE PRESENCE of guys with GOOD INSIDES..

the same the other way too..unless someone who knows what true love is, one hardly understands what the other's true inside is.

raise you spirits up. have hope.
and my part, i just hope you are not hurt because of a bad guy. or simply, i hope THAT GUY isn't a BAD GUY..

im sorry if i have talked too much, but there is really so much i could tell people about these heart-love-pain issues..

take care..

Princess Poo said...

@Sujata Jhi
Thank you :).
Its all blessings of people like you :).

@Thousif
Hehehe! Thanks man :)

@blackandwhiteheart
No its not much :).
Yea!
Thanks.

roopz said...

Wonderful lines...Very touching!
Happy blogging :)

Regards
village girl

The Narcissist said...

Sigh. the sad ending was quite sad :) Lovely poem :)

vineetchhajer said...

Lovely thought indeed.. but not the end i expected it to be..!! :) Good job though

Princess Poo said...

@Roopz
Thanks dear :).

@Narcissist
Thank you :).

@Vineet
Thanks :).
You expected Happy Ending? :)

The Solitary Writer said...

this is too good sweety :)

N.S.Kirti said...

oh hey, i posted a comment here, seems it didnt appear. anyways, i nominated you for "versatile blogger award" here is the post http://versesfrommyheart.blogspot.com/2011/12/merry-christmas-and-ummmm-just-merry.html

Princess Poo said...

@Satish thanks :)

@Kirti
It is there dear :).
OMG :O Thanks a lot <3

The Fallen Poet said...

very well penned...i have a penchant for writing poetry...and i am always on a look out for reading some interesting work....so very well penned...good job and thank you for sharing

Princess Poo said...

@TFP
I'm really glad you liked it :).
Welcome to my world :).
Hope you like your stay here :).

Thanks <3

Jen..The Butterfly Effect said...

That was such an adorable poem !! Especially the last two paras are so touching.And those pictures are simply WOW!:) Loneliness can make us brim with creative avenues right!! :)

Princess Poo said...

@Jen
Thank you Jen <3 :D :).
Yup, it does ;) :D.
Thanks once again dear :).

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