Saturday, January 21, 2012

Broken Wings


 I was a free, free bird
who flew with wings open wide.
Moving from place to place,
giving all my passions a ride.

I was a really happy bird,
who loved flying free in the sky.
I never knew what feeling low meant,
When I figured that my life was a lie.

I was told I could be anyone,
you told me I could do anything.
Do you remember saying all that?
Now that you cut my wing.

I'm hurt and I'm broken,
But I will not give up.
Even though the blood is pouring,
into a pain-filled cup.

I'll do what I've always wanted to do,
until the life bell rings.
As I'm a free, free bird,
who flies with broken wings.


12 comments:

  1. broken wings is not failure.

    broken heart is a failure.

    never loose your heart...

    good poetry princess

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  2. broken wings can heal Pooja. with time and love. hope you get both of those in HUGE amounts..
    nice poem :)

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  3. @Gowardhan Jhi
    I wont jhi :).
    Thanks for commenting :D.

    @Kirti
    I know dear :).
    I already have them all ;) :D. I mean its obvious. I have friends like you :D. I have all the love in this world ;) :D. TIME!! Aaah!!
    Thanks dear :).
    Love you :*

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  4. :( :|
    chooo nych :)

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  5. Great lines. And they convey the idea of hope really well... :)

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  6. Inspirational... Reminded me of Kailash Kher song toota toota ek parinda...

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  7. @Taurus
    Thanks jhi :)

    @Vishal
    Thank you :)

    @DS
    aww :"> Really thanks :).
    Yeah!! I love that song <3

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  8. We all encounter such moments many a times in our lives and all that we need to do then, is to repeat the last verse of the poem.

    Truly inspirational, full of hope and positivity. Superb!! :)

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  9. @Arti Deedi
    Yeah!!
    Thanks :).
    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.

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  10. Aah...flying with broken wings. Lovely lines Pooja. Also, can totally relate to this.

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  11. @Antara
    Yep... Thanks dear.
    Ooh! Maybe we can fly together ;) :D.

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  12. Very well expressed-hope the wings mend well.

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